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Tommy Boy
by Jennifer White

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Comment by Smiley on 12/13/11
Ah, i see. Well that's not too trckiy at all!"

Comment by Danielle on 06/02/07
Another great story. Way to go! I would have gone through the other door and I honestly thought that Tina would call the Ladies bluff. I wonder what she would say to the parents. Still I love the ending. Everyone got what they wanted not what the parents wanted. You are starting to really impress me.

  Danielle


Comment by Dementia on 05/14/07
I check in a lot to see if there are new stories posted of yours. I usually like about 50 percent of them, and this is probably one of your best stories ever! Very realistic, and I didn't have to suspend reality like in some of my other favorites of yours. I'm glad to see that you have improved a huge amount since you've started!

Comment by Angela E. on 05/13/07
Loved the ending,even though I would have gone through the door on the left.                          



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