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Toni
by Lane Maclane

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Comment by David Martin on 07/06/23
Sexy story. Loved it.

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Comment by suba me on 12/21/18
ZQAThu We stumbled over here coming from a different website and thought I might as well check things out.

Comment by Sharon on 05/24/11
That was such a beautiful story.As a crossdresser i had my first
sex with a male when i was 15.

Comment by Geena on 11/03/09
Please, please..... more about this lovely couple!

Comment by mike on 08/21/09
very nice story.love takes strange turns.sometimes we run away and sometimes we run towards it.sometimes it takes time to sort out.

Comment by Silvia    (from Brazil) on 06/27/09
You're really a great and lovely writer, please don't stop.
write,write, and write, more,and more always.
Kisses, kisses, and more kisses.
Silvia.

Comment by Sara Jones on 02/06/09
Lovely, I remember my first time with another tranny, and it felt just like that, not wrong, just sexy.

Comment by jeannette on 01/11/09
VERY EROTIC story!! Love, "jeannette" (jojo2298@yahoo.com)

Comment by bobby on 10/23/08
Althoh there are numerous grammatical/syntax errors, I find your gift of descripion to be quite remarkable fro someone who does not use English as a first language.

This is a sweet story that is at its heart a romance.  After many months of abstinence, during which they fall in love, they set aside their inhibitions and express themselves in an erotically sexy way.  

Too bad more people in the world are not open minded to all of life's possibilities!

Like the reviewer Jack above, in addtion to being open to and enjoying relationships with CD's I now thorouoghly enjoy orally servicing them as much as I enjoyed being serviced.  It took me a while to get there, but it was more than worth it!  


Comment by Jack on 10/16/08
It's never easy for a she-male to find a straight man who will date her, love her, and ultimately suck her cock and willingly let her flood his mouth with warm semen.  I'm glad the author allowed for a sensual ending to the story.  Dating a she-male named Leah in my early twenties allowed me my first chance to suck another man's penis, and I've always been grateful for the discovery.  No doubt Matt's first time tasting another man will not be his last - far from it, trust me.



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