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Ton of Bricks
by Carrie P

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Comment by adraine on 08/09/11
wow, can't wait to see what happans next hopefuly something more permernant  thanks Adraine

Comment by ashely on 05/15/10
loved the second part as well. Getting ready for  - - - - - - ?mmmmmmmm

Comment by ashley on 05/15/10
Good for Abe, guess he is going to be in for some action later on???

Comment by Sherri on 05/21/09
I love the first two parts and can't wait for many more to come. I hope you have plenty of adventures for our new gurl to enjoy. Love this story line dear!!!!

Comment by WannabeGinger on 04/26/08
Nice story building up....  pleeeeeze do write a further chapter; we're all waiting!   Your hair has great potential....  live a little!  Have it set and coloured and then marry the stylist and live happily ever after!  xx

Comment by Rhonda Clarke on 07/19/06
Great story so far, I hope you post part three soon. Your story is a TVs dream.

Comment by Michelle on 06/28/06
1 complaint...6 months between installments?? Nooooo. sooner...must have sooner lol.  Very nice saga, well written, please keep it coming.

Comment by sissystevie on 06/24/06
I love this story and hope Part 3 is posted soon! It has the making of a great TG yarn. xxx stevie

Comment by juiej on 01/20/06
a good story awaiting next part in due course

Comment by Carrie Parker on 01/16/06
I have submitted part 2...however it might be as long a 100 days before it is posted on the site.

Any comments on my previous part are welecome and you can respond to directly.

Kisses,
Carrie.

Comment by Joanna K on 01/16/06
Carrie, Thisis the start of an excellent CD story, exactly what I surf thru these sites for.  Now, is she going to discover shes a ts?  Find romance? Whenever you're ready for part II.  thank you,,, Joanna

Comment by a guy on 01/16/06
a day the TV spends en femme in public for the first time, alone.


Comment by Carrie P on 01/02/06
Hi Sassysue...thanks for your kind words and sorry for the confusion.

Your comments found their target and the author is Carrie_P (or Carrie Parker)

Part two will follow shortly...

Comment by SassySue on 12/16/05
A Ton of Bricks by Jenn Hendricks is very well written for anyone, let alone a first time poster.  I really enjoyed it and look forward to reading Jenn's further adventures over the summer with her complete makeover and with the new doorman.  Keep up the good work!  

However, I was confused since the "What's New" page listed this story as by Carrie P.  I just hope my comments go to the right author with all the problems this site is having.

SS



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