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Too Clever By Half
by Nadia Savage

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Comment by RoyalCBD.com on 03/02/21
G8gG2s Utterly   indited  articles ,  regards  for information.

Comment by suba analuba on 08/12/18
wfwEED This is a topic close to my heart cheers, where are your contact details though?

Comment by matzcrorkz on 08/04/14
Cf4qqy I really liked your article post.Really thank you!

Comment by only for 5 dollars on 09/12/13
iiirE6 Thanks for the post.Much thanks again. Great.

Comment by Robyn R. on 03/07/10
Keep the story goin..lol reminds me of what I went through ducking my family when they came home unexpected.

Comment by Amy Pool on 01/10/10
Really like the story so far please continue...

Comment by WannabeGinger on 01/07/10
At last,  .... chapter 4 gets things moving....  Can you make ch.5 a little longer please?  Nice beginning.  Love, Ginger xx

Comment by LGC on 01/06/10
Looks like a cute start . Bryan and Nat seem to have a really good relationship .I think That this will help a lot when Nat discover Bryan secret :)

Comment by PJ78 on 01/02/10
reminds me of a few close scrapes from my younger days! looking forward to part 4 :)

Comment by Lisa on 06/04/08
Too bad that both listings are the same.Looks like it could be an interesting story.
Lisa

Comment by Jenny on 04/14/08
Which suburb are you in??
I live down near Beenleigh!
Nice style for the story - this looks like it could be an enjoyable read.

Comment by j on 04/10/08
chap 1 is a repeat of chap 2 - ooops



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