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Too Cute
by Rachel Ann Cooper

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Comment by Sayge on 09/19/23
When are you going to finish this and your other stories.  You are a great write, your plots and characters are realistic and entertaining.  I would truly love to read the finished stories.

Comment by suba me on 04/19/19
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Comment by suba me on 05/10/17
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Comment by petermac on 11/02/14
Excellent story very enjoyable please write more chapters

Comment by crorkservice on 07/18/14
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Comment by Silvia. on 09/10/11
Lisa really likes Marty. She's a wonderful woman and they should be together.
Very good tale.

Comment by Katie Jean on 01/22/11
I just love all your stories I've read so far.

Comment by aletys on 11/08/10
 Seriously Rachael, you have got to finish this one. It is not the suspense, which is there, but the decision that Marty is going to take. Is Lisa straight or looking for a girlfriend. The parents, how will they react, supportive or disown Marty.    Love Aletys

Comment by Broxx on 04/08/09
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Comment by Ally on 03/29/09
 This a really great story. I was impressed with both characters especially Lisa. I am upset that you stopped the story where you did. This really needs an ending, or more of a middle. I guess I really want to see which way Marty is going to go.
Love Ally!!!

Comment by stephen on 11/24/08
i hope this is part one and there's more? i cant wait for part two is there is one.

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Comment by john on 10/19/08
good work man

Comment by Jane Bond on 10/11/08
Fascinating plot; lots of potential.
Where's it going?

Comment by jackie on 08/26/08
Back in the 40s my mother wore garters, which were fabric covered elastic circles. She was thin and didn't need a girdle. The garters kept her stockings up.

Comment by Rita Spencer on 02/22/07
I really enjoyed this one and look forward to a few more episodes, keep up the good work.

Comment by Ronnie Johnson on 11/18/06
I just read your story 'Too Cute' and think it is wonderful.  It has a lot of potential for a very great story and could be developed in many different ways.  Please finish it.  It is much to good to let it stop where it is.

Comment by Connie on 10/13/05
I remember Suspants.  My mother wore them but mostly wore a garter belt.  I wore them also before I started wearing a girdle when dressed up (my dresses fitted better).  I usually wore panties under both.

Comment by J. McKenzie on 01/03/03
Suspants were used in place of a girdle or garter belt to hold womens stockings up. It was a modern convenience before and after WW II. Garters could be removed and they could just be worn as a panty.

Comment by Mary on 10/22/02
Please continue this story don't leave us hanging.

Comment by DeeDee Clark on 05/20/02
Don't leave me in suspants. What happened next???


P.S. Suspanties were sold before and after WW2. They wera gartered so your stockings were held up.  



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