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Tortured Tina
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Comment by pussy lovelace on 09/24/02
i love these stories. Jean's stories are probably my favourites on the whole site. i love the harder edge and the bondage/S&M themes and the end to this story is highly charged. Only pity for me is that Jean's tg heroines usually turn the tables on their captors and tormentors. The sub in me would far prefer to see the character with whom i most identify continuing to suffer. Comment by Amber Chalise on 08/15/02 Good finish even though I sort of saw the happy ending coming. I might as well pick up reading your other stories. A good piece of advice is go for a longer story and be more detailed about the male character becoming female. Otherwise you got good follow through and focus. Comment by Paula on 08/15/02 had mix feeling on this but the mannequin poll bit seem more of a bondage subject that a mannequin or doll one. The ending was interesting though. Comment by Jezzi Belle Stewart on 08/15/02 I appologize for my comments after "Terrified Tina". I should have known from the Barbie/Su-Lin series that you would pull a reversal. "Tina Triumphant" |
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