She's good looking, but I've seen ptenly of girls who look as good or better than Alba. In general you see girls out who look just as good, but because she's a star it makes a girl more attractive.Why do girls love Brad Pitt? Or George Clooney back in the day?

No cpomlaints on this end, simply a good piece.

I can't believe you're not pylaing with me--that was so helpful.

Hi.
Jessica and Penny should finish this story as women.
But, this is a good story.
I liked.
Kisses.
Silvia.

I'm simply shattered.  This was the most emotional of the "Seasons of Change" stories that I've read.  
You had a great plot here and I commend you for your writing prowess.  I do believe that there are a few things that leave your story open to continuation with Jessica and Penny and the rest of their story.
Thank you for your stories in collaboration with Tigger.

XO XO XO.

Rereading your story, I must apologise to both of you. I believe that Jesse can find his true love and fully realize his artistic potential. The perfect one for Jesse is Caitlynn, the boy who finally accepts his gifs and becomes a woman. Have them meet and Caitlynn introduce Jesse into the art world, . Then, as an attorney working for Aunt jane, finds the strength to become the artist he hides with in. Maybe even get Caytlynn pregnant so Jese has completion.[[Just make Caytlynn aone with both genders. Now THAT would be a most unusual Aunt Jane story. And please do more pictures of Aunt jane's students. I think everybody wants to see her entire family from Michelle-Micheal to Jesse-Jessica

Brandy DeWinter, & Tigger, SHAME ON BOTH OF YOU!!!!! Jessica's story has yet to be fully told. Which one of you will tell of her realising she needs to nurtue the artist in her and develop her potential as an artist. And what of her little sisters? there are stories there too and Penny's concern for Jessica too. Please Do a story where Benny/Penny finds his role in life and Jesse either becomes Jessica and marries her dream boat or finds a girl for him.

What a lovely story!  I started reading all the Jane Thompson stories over in Tigger's section of Storysite, and I had to read this one too.  I loved the way that you developed Jessica's character and brought out his emotional growth.  And I really liked the way that you and Tigger integrated this story with Tigger's stories.  Nice teamwork!

I managed to find the website you share with Tigger, and I read all the sections on how you create your drawings.  I am still impressed.  And still jealous.  I can't draw a straight line.  I am going to have to give your concepts a try and see if I can create something that doesn't make me shudder.  :-)

Xora is still my favorite of your characters, but I warmed up to Jessica over the course of the story.  Thank you so much for contributing to Storysite and everywhere else.

Diane

My dear just loved the story does Jess every dress agian I hope so but then I would just love to look as good as Jessica .This is in all part great.I love these storys.

a very good description of peticat punishement a lot of swearing i willbe interwsted to read the next part in due course as it is very long but so far a great story

As a 72 yr old male I have read a lot of storys of young males being made to feel and look like young ladys. You and Tigger have a very big future as you both can make a story very real. I like that, but having only read one of your storys and do not know what you put into your storys. PS. I would like to make a change in your storys and that is for you to tell the highest of the heels and the small'ish the waist was made. A very very good story I love it.

an iteresting story takes a lot of reading and understanding
what a way for uruly boys to be treated  I only wish it happened in real life instead of just a well written story.

The story was excellent and moving. Tears welled up in my eyes at several points. The beginnng did require suspension of disbelief, but that suspension was amply rewarded. I thought the story moved slowly at some points, but I know many like that. For me, I would have liked a few more adventures instead of the present amplification of the ones presented. Still, an excellent stoy and one that leaves me looking for more - congratulations.

Extremely well done. I wish that the story was longer. You and Tigger obviously put a great deal of effort into writing this wonderful story. Hope to see more of your classy work.

It started as a normal Aunt Jane story, although blessed by Brandy's fine prose and rich imagination. But as it went further, I went from being entertained to being deeply moved as Jessica learned compassion. Brandy has remarkable psychological depth and subtlety, and she uses them to our advantage in this fine story.

My gosh I loved this story and thought it was a joy to read. Ok, so the truth is I haven't gotten to the second part but from what I've read the and that being part 1 I think you did a fantastic job.

I've never read any of the stories that Tigger has written as of yet but, if this is an indication of Tigger's works then I'll have to look them up also.

There were so many great references to the arts and the use of clearly cleverly chosen words made the whole story come to life for me.

This is truly one of the more brilliant stories I've had the pleasure to have read and I look forward to the 2nd part that I will download.

Besides all the above this may be the first of your stories that I've read and I'm very sorry I had not given the time to have come to your story pages before.

The way the ending of the first part has been formulated would seem to make the reader want to  see what the plot is for the next part even though I may have an idea.

With a talent such as Brandy has surely attained I just may be surprised though. Time will tell and even if I'm not surprised by the outcome I will have totally enjoyed this story. And that's the thing that really counts.

Diane

An excellent story -- well-written, and a worthy addition to Tigger's chronicles of Seasons.

   Very well written story.  The writer has obviously been to a good,disciplined school herself.... :)
   The characters were very well defined and interesting.  Brandy has distinctive writing talent; and I would enjoy reading more of her delightful prose.

  I didn't really care for the story but what I admired was your writing style. It made the story eminently readable.
  Your command of perspective was also good. I like the way you dealt with jesse's internal and external dialogue. The main character was believable even though the story itself required heavy suspension of disbelief to be appreciated.