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Tales of the Season - Ken's Barbie
by Tigger

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Comment by Mia on 08/16/08
The love story is nice but I really have a problem with the idea that Jane would win any court case. How Ken could ever think that winning would be a sure thing is beyond me.
Starting the 1st night of the boys when they are drugged without a physician/anesthesiologist there to check for bad reactions to the drug Jane breaks enough laws that she wouldn't have a snowballs chance in hell if she ever went to court. That alone is enough.
If during the court proceedings it came to light that one of her students tried to commit suicide and she didn't even get him to a doctor but got a RN to illegally dispense drugs she would look at a couple of years in jail regardless of outcome.
And if it came out that she ignored the counsel of the psychologist (to get him to his family) she would be in deep shit.
The same goes if it is found out that one of her students really changed into a girl even if that was his predisposition.
And if it ever came out that she liked to play sex games with adults where the men were dressed up like women I doubt she would ever get out of jail.
I mean I love the stories but be a little more realistic please.

Comment by Sally Ann Francis on 04/22/08
Thank you for another fine experence at Seasons house. I love your stories and look forward to seeing your name on as many sites as possable. Sally.

Comment by Stanley Morton on 07/28/07
Tigger and Brandy A new author "LISAELIZABETH " has written a new SEASONS HOUSE story, CHARLENE'S STORY. Did you know about this? Me, I hope she can do Aunt Jane justice

Comment by Stanley Morton on 07/06/07
Well Tigger, not only does Aunt Jane have the fun of planning the gala wedding for Micheal-Michelle, she shows her love by getting ready for more gala events. Tigger, What else is in store for Aunt Jane and Seasons House?

Comment by cgvivien on 08/03/04
Kens Barbie is such a heartwarming story as I've ever read!
It was very difficult for me to read it though as I kept
devoloping a serious leak around my eyes!  If you ever quit
writing like that I may just quit reading.So please keep
writing those ever so excellent stories of yours,hear?
The other great thing is that I find myself speaking quite a
bit more proffessional as well as better educated thanks to
such an excellent author as yourself! Thank you so very much!

Comment by Cg Vivien on 08/01/04
Wonderful stories. I find myself feeling like I am there in the stories that you write, {tales of the season} Please don't stop writing these stories.  They're great!  I fell asleep reading a couple of them late at night only to wake up and keep reading!

Comment by Gwen Brown on 07/30/04
It really was a lovely story. Your style is such that I hope you have had a lot of sucsess as a professional, in print, writer.

Gwen

Comment by Gwen Brown on 07/29/04
I am in Chapter 5. This is really wonderfully written and I love it. I too have my "Trigger" words. For once someone is portraying the some of the trauma that happens to many in Child hood. I disagree with the idea that Mom and Dad made me bad but I also well know that these things help to shape our personalities (In my case, I think for the better because I well know the Gwen within Gwinn.

Gwen

Comment by Kristi Fitzpatrick on 04/08/04
  Tigger:


 Suddenly I was entranced and enraptured and could not put away this tale. Not at least until there was only one hour left for me to rest before the next day. It was worth it! I have not been universally captivated by your tales, but this is fantastic even surpassing Fornever in Blue Genes. The suspense of how exactly it was going to work out and the constant two threads of the story going on side by side made your normally great writing over the top. There is a sense of fun, excitement even exhilaration that is attractive in any media and that has been achieved here.  

 I feel we see the Season's crew here at their best. I very highly recommend this story.

Hugs,

Kristi

Comment by Sam Katz (M) on 12/12/03
I accidentally read section 11.. and it pretty much stands on its own. Did you do research for this? The physchology is cool. really cool.

--Sam and his anima

Comment by ???? on 10/06/03
More "Aunt Jane" stories, please!  They are all GOOD.

A thought, Darla, Michelle, and Kendra are all "hitched".  It seems that Adrienne's eventual spouse has been decided.  Jessica needs a worthy mate.  Go for it, please, "big cat".

Comment by Eve A. on 12/20/02
Another great "Aunt Jane" story.   They are all very good, and I can't wait for the next one.  My only question - occasionally reference is made to some former "student" by name, and I can't recall him/her.  I thought I had read them all, but maybe there are some others I don't know about?  Regardless, I found Ken's Barbie another example of your fine technique of trapping the reader into a "can't wait for the next chapter" mood.  I hope you haven't yey run out of ideas.  You have a vivid imagination (or is it all imagination?).  Keep up the good work.

Comment by Sandra Michelle on 12/19/02
Very, very well done...........

Comment by Jane Hudson on 12/14/02
I keep reading the lastest storys they just keep getting better and better my dears .I love the love story going on between Kendra and Skipper so sweet .They are very loving storys.Keep up the good work

Comment by Jane Hudson on 12/08/02
I love your storys Jane is one hell of a great woman strong but kind I love Darly she a real fun  girl boy and Kendra is a great big softy under the tough shell .They are lovely loving storys.

Comment by Annie O on 12/08/02
Tigger:
    I'm at a loss for words at the lack of comments on such an expression of love you show in the Seasons stories!
    The amount of time and effort you put into this story must be staggering.
     I, for one small part of your legion of fans, say THANK YOU FOR THIS STORY!
     LaP, Annie O

Comment by Annie O on 12/07/02
New York--Pennsylvania border? You probably mean N.J.-Pa. border.
   And, yes, there's a lot on construction, especially between N.J. and Valley Forge exit.
   Barbie is smart to avoid eating on the Tpke.
   I'm impressed with your knowledge of Boston's "roundabouts" rather than traffic circles.
   I think Ken would come over the GW bridge then get confused as hell trying to find the N.J. tpke.

Comment by Jane Hudson on 12/06/02
I love the storys they are great. Jane is one hell of a woman .Its also a set of storys with happy endings .Great work keep on going. I just love reading them.

Comment by X on 12/01/02
Tiggs, warm and furry hugs to you!
  That said, LCD is Liquid Crystal Display -- the "display" after it is redundant.
  There's a line with ",?" -- the comma is unnecessary.
  Other than that, I loved the start -- women can be such "bitches" when aroused!



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