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Total Control
by Jennifer White

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Comment by Early June on 08/20/05
Another imaginative view.  I am amazed at the different plots this author generates. She defined the male character with just enough flaws to makes us all dislike him.  Casey wanting to be a man was a complete surprise.  Gee, another "Happy Ever After Ending".  Gigglz

Comment by Eva on 08/13/05
It was a nice idea, and the writing was decent, but Dennis's character was so pathetic--such a silly straw-man--that it made the story more frustrating than fun.  Casey's character had no depth either.  This kind of stuff seems to happen a lot in the shorter stories.  



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