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Totally, Tina!
by Jean M. Chambers

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Comment by Rikicad on 01/02/10
Jean I love all your stories. Can't wait for a new one

Comment by Morgan Thomas on 08/24/04
Oops... my mistake... I just noticed the sequels are in... off to read them now  :)

Comment by Morgan Thomas on 08/24/04
Agree on the sequel notion... I'd like Tina to gain acceptance of her new self and get intimately involved with a good natured hunk.


Comment by julie j on 07/17/04
a story beyond belief a lot of hipnosis appears to have been carried out over the past year interesting a story of revenge

Comment by julie j on 07/17/04
its a forced story a lot of hipnosis by the sound of it Its intresting how it has been done over the past year well done
good story

Comment by Amber Chalise on 08/15/02
I haven't read a forced story like this in a while. Simply perfect and I hope the others are just as great.

Comment by meeah on 07/24/02

oh this story is perfect just as it is! noooo revenge, pleeeze....if anything make it more & more exactly like this! its not just totally tina!, its totally hot!  

Comment by Rachel Ann on 07/23/02
Delightfully twisted!

Comment by Nellie D on 07/23/02
I have to agree with the others, Tim/Tina needs to escape from the bitch.
There must be a sequel - Tina's Revenge

Comment by Rose2 on 07/23/02
 So tim/Tina is a "Bambi" like Bimbo,  what else can happen.  I would like a little more info on why Janice felt justified in this course of action.  Like everyone else I'll add my request for the sequal.

Rose2 (the 1st Rose)

Comment by Paula Jutras on 07/23/02
I had to step out of the store when I was had way through it. Before I get back to reading it I'd like to say that I've loved what I read so far and look forward to finishing this piece of work.

Comment by Jezzi Belle Stuart on 07/23/02
Janice likes Tina but hates Tim, but how will she enjoy her revenge on Tim if Tina becomes "Totally Tina" and doesn't remember being Tim?  You really surprised me, Jean, when Su Lin got revenge on Judy.  I hope you write a sequel and do the same for Tina and Janice.  You didn't make Tim seem like a bad guy, so Janice appears the bitch just like Judy.  

Comment by Rose on 07/23/02
Great story. What a way for a girlfriend to get revenge.
I hope there is going to be a sequel in with Tina gets he revenge.

Comment by Trebor54 on 07/22/02
 I hope you write a sequel where Tina gets her revenge by making that damn bitch hurt bigtime in her sex spots. Find some way to turn her into a whore would be to good for her!!!!!!!!!!



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