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Town and Gown
by Bek D Corbin

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Comment by Allen on 06/26/13
Sadly the Sapphire Place site seems to have gone down. Is there another place we can find the rest of the Jordan Winters stories?

Comment by Silvia. on 11/04/10
Good story! I liked!
Kisses.
Silvia.

Comment by grover on 07/03/06
I like Jordan. The character is such a little scamp!  A smart-alic and trouble magnite of the frist water.  This is just so much fun to read that I hope that someday Bek will continue it.

Comment by Jade on 02/02/06
This was a wonderful story yet there still a few more things that could be added to the story.  Such as if Dan does something to make him into Jordan permently or there fact that he swore as Jordan and not as Dan.

Comment by Diane Castle on 12/15/04
This is another terrific Jordan Winters story.  And, for those lurking at home, there are more Jordan Winters stories over at Sapphire's Place too.

I really enjoy the way that you create a world for your characters.  Jordan has a world where magic works.. by specific rules.  Just like your other characters in other stories live by their world-views.  Keep up the good work!

Love,
Diane

Comment by Rebecca Anne Stewart on 09/13/02
I am very impressed.  The style is slightly reminisant of Ellen Hayes which I also enjoy a great deal.  Your humour styling is quite good also.  I am looking forward to seeing more storys' from you in the future....please continue on as we are now waiting for the next installment of Jordan.
            Sincerely: Rebecca Anne Stewart.

Comment by David on 08/05/02
WOW!!
     An incredibley good read. Fantastic characters and a story line
that is a definate page turner. I was glued to the end...just couldn't put it down.  I do hope that you are not going to keep us in suspense too long....HAVE to know what happens next!!!!

     Add me to you lengthly ardent admirer list...Fantastic job.


                                   D.

Comment by Hebe Dotson on 05/11/02
A very enjoyable series. Please keep the stories coming!

Comment by Traci Klawes on 05/10/02
Great GREAT story!  Definitely keep up the good work!

Comment by Jenny on 05/10/02
Loved the story. Very reminiscent of the stlye of RA Heinlein. Keep up the good work.

Jenny

Comment by Jezzi Belle Stewart on 05/10/02
Great story!  I certainly hope it continues.  Dan/Jordan seems in many ways like Ellen Hayes' Tuck/Valerie - with out the dark coating Ellen seems to put on everything.  (No insult to Ellen; it works for her stories, and they are great, too.)  Keep up the good work!  PS - I would like to see Mom find out; I think from hints in the story so far that Dan might be surprised at her reaction.

Comment by kr on 05/09/02
Goody! Bek finally shows up at Crystal's. I can barely wait til Jordan's next adventure gets posted.

Comment by Heather Sinclair on 05/08/02
Excellent Story! I hope this isn't the end of Jordon's adventures.



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