Great description of the unveiling of the boyfriend's manhood.

Nicely done.  An interesting story.

Dear Teresa: Makes me feel like putting on one of my cheerleader outfits! I am a cross dresser who enjoys dressing up as a cheerleader and attending peace marches, environment protests and other appropriate events. (so I'll check out any stories with the key word "cheerleader" as long as they are not XXX rated).  As far as the story is concerned, I could certainly see where you were headed; the irony of Trent and "Jill" falling for each other was obvious (to me, anyway). And of course all the plot threads were neatly wrapped up. I generally don't care for vivid descriptions of sex play, but am aware that others do. Would like to have known what "Jill" was studying; that would have rounded out her character a bit more. This reminded me a bit of another story in which the hero/heroine was befriended by a "genetic girl" who helped him/her realize his/her true nature and then died. Glad there as no "forced feminization" or "identity death," just a (mostly) sweet tale of someone finally discovering herself.
Feel free to write me at the above address and best wishes for the new year!
I look forward to reading more of your work.
Myself-- I'm a music journalist and have never written any fiction.(Could probably help "edit" stories though).
Peace-- hippie cheerleader      

This was great story, first part was a real tear jerker. You definitely have talent and imagination. Keep writing. Season Greetings belatedly.

Michelle Anne
aka Michelleokc08@gmail.com

This was a very nice, well written story.  My congratulations.