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The Trained Husband
by Stephen Birkett

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Comment by Angie Kay on 01/26/13
Some of the technical details had me baffled, but all-in-all a lovely story.  Perhaps not all fantasy? :)

Comment by Cindy Satin on 09/13/11
Strong stuff! Wonderful though! Loved all the detail - gave me quite a few ideas!

Comment by sissy jennie on 02/01/10
i quite enjoyed your story, although i believe that all references to yourself should be in lowercase letters i.e. " sissy, not Sissy".
 The singular of a female human is woman, not women. Women is the plural form of the feminine being.
    Descriptions your restraining / chastity devices are excessively and needlessly long.
  Otherwise a good story, but i need to know if your "formula" was the sissy seepage you had reluctantly given earlier, or was it something else?  Was it laced with hormones as well?
  Hugs and Kisses,
sissy jennie

Comment by swedesubsissy on 01/04/09
I love this story! The details are so well described as you can almost see them or feel them. Has this author written anything else?

Comment by occasional reader on 10/22/06
Kinky and well written. Thanks!

Comment by juliej on 09/15/05
very interesting story would have liked to read how it all began as a prelude to reading this story well done &written

Comment by Soulman on 02/04/05
Fantastic story, having read it multiple times now, if this is your first submission keep up the great work!!!



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