I didn't like the story, It isn't good.
Silvia.

Bad story, I didn't like!
Silvia.

Excellent beginning, Mistress Marie. Seems to me you are well on your way to having a full-time live-in sissy maid at your disposal. Things at the "office" sound interesting as well. From one successful Mistress to another -- WELL DONE!

Seems to me based on the length of time that has elapsed since the story was posted, if it were true, that the worm has probably turned by now. I know if I'd been the guy in this story the author would have had plenty of time to regret her stupidity in not just leaving.

the story is fast going but interesting please use a spell checker next time but it was a good effort

you should of pierced his nipples

   I won't reiterate what others have said.  I liked the story because it does sound authentically written by a woman.  Yes some of the stuff sounds contrived- like suddenly having the tie string panty when after the shower- you can't put on a panty normally given the leg chains.  However, the tone of a an angry and dispirited wife fed up and desperate to change the direction of her marriage is put forth well.  
   Love to see a continuation with the recommnedations of other readers paid attention too.
Thank you for writing this entertaining story and sharing it with us
Mandee

Dear Sister Marie,

I just loved the story. I only wish I could have been subjected to the same treatment many years ago.

Please, PLEASE use your spell checker and have someone proofread your work. The numerous spelling errors make it most difficult to read and follow the story.

On behalf of all your sisters, THANKS.

EllieAnne

same comment as previous

interesting but hard to read so many spelling mistakes a goood try to start off with

Liked the jest of the story, but hard to read.  You really need to learn how to spell and punctuate, with commas and periods. "I" is always capitalized when used by itself.  That alone would help a lot.  Good luck with your next attempt.

Like the story but if she don't do anything to show him the good side of dressing  he will hit back and hit hard my dear

The spelling sucks,but I realy did like the story.I hope to see more from you. Maybe my wife will read them and get some great ideas. Thanks for putting a rise in my panties.

For crying out loud!  SPELLCHECK!  Is it so hard?

<<  How I train my macho husband to be submissive and I now have a cute girlfriend at my disposal whenever I want. >>

At the end of this part one, his compliance is not really submissiveness, as nothing has been done to change his attitude.  He is submitting only because of fear of exposure.  therefore, letting all those women know about him is counterproductive; he will soon realize that the greater the number who know, the "if" people find out becomes "when" people find out.  At that point he will reach a "Freedom's just another word for nothing left to loose." point and strike back.  Since there has been no carrot offered to balance the stick, nothing done to get him to actually become her girl-friend, he most likely hates those women and I wouldn't bet on their safety when he reaches that point..

I normally enjoy these kidns of sotries, but this one is pretty one-dimensional.  It's just a long paragraph.  No dialogue, just a rambling description.  Needs more work.