this was a good story very fast paced but not soft a leeson to be learnt by all well done

I think that everyone here agrees that, while you're writing style is quite good, your characters are selfish. Andy felt more like a victim than his wife. She just came across as selfish, cruel, and self-centered.

Seems to me that the wife was much nastier than the husband as is usually the case with these types of stories. He, of course, was pathetically stupid and unobservant while she was nasty, selfish and vindictive. I think it might be a good idea for some of these authors who utilize hypnosis and/or auto-suggestion in their plots to at least get some idea of both their potential as well as their limitations before making fools of themselves.

Yeah, another personality forever doomed to having been.  And, another wooman seeing the only way to keep the loving person while keeping them handy is to eliminate them.  But it is written so well.  The logic flows.  The narration engrosses, the characters stand out and identify themselves clearly as capable of the actions described.  Well Done!  Thanks for sharing.

Another murderess, although this time it was, as she implied, a mercy killing.  However, I think she should at least have given Andy a choice:  Be the fun Andrea I like or I'll kill you off and have her anyway.  And then give him some time to see if he could adjust to being the Andrea she wanted.  She could kill him off anytime she wanted if he failed.