Another good story and plot.  As usual another quick engagement and marriage.  I would have like to have seen them help each other when they had bad experiences and not just life threatening ones as it would have helped them remember each other more.  I sure Stephanie would have also found out what drugs she had been taking early on in the story as I expected her to have withdrawal quickly after not tacking any.  (I took it that she was being forced to take heroin and hence having withdrawal very quickly.)  When as Stephen met his/her old school friends I would have expected them to say something like "Now that is Stephanie", unless he/she had changed so much they said "That is not Stephanie either!"

Great story Prue, as always.
Kisses.

Great story Prue, as always.
Kisses.
Silvia.

damn i love your stuff...more please

Hi Prudence
Thanks for tking the time to write this story and all the other story's you've wrote. And Thanks to Sara for all the great artwork. Sara if you read this, please keep doing the artwork as it is really great and no matter what some people may say I love it allot.

Thanks again Prudence for your great work.

Dizzy (A big fan in the making :-))

I just fini part 5 and respect Prudence's storyteller skills. The artwork was excellent, hey if photo quality was wanted then SUGGEST THAT hon! Reluctant Press artwork is similar to this...so enuff about that. The story of Stephen/Stephenie catches the mindeye right off, and in both cases the humanity of the characters is enlivened by the troubles they face...hauntingly so in the case of 'Stephenie CD' who is portrayed realistically.....i hate to grump but....too many tg fiction seem to stray off into a fairyland that, while easy on the heart nerves etc maybe too 'lived happy ever after' ....and bog down because, well, things just go too smoothie fur this old cynic! Anyway, part 6 is up and i can see some of that 'heck and darnation' is back...i don't trust Heather or Julie (Stephenie GG's old girlfriends); they seem kinda sneaky! I do like nice stories.....but prefer it when wheels fall off and snafu bigtime!
Great work Prue!
pyyrd (da seasick sailor) ;o)  

In response to "HAPPY READER" i'm glad you liked my story enough to leave a comment, but to slag off at one of my dear friends artwork is unexceptable. Your words have hurt her deeply, and the result is that work she had in progress for me has been scrapped. She says she won't be doing anymore. Her work may not meet your standards, but are way above my capabilities. she does them from scratch and doesn't use some sort of template image as a lot do. her work is doubly precious to me as not only is it individual, it comes from her heart. originaly i asked for one image for my story, but because of things i had done in the past to help her, she gifted me with a lot more than i'd expected. i had finished transfer in september last year. sara was going to do the pics for me but her time was limited and it wasnt till november that i got the first images. i finally started posting the stories, leaving lots of time between postings hoping more pics would arrive. after the first three chapters had been posted i waited again, having no pics for the last chapters. it was 4 months before i reluctantly posted the rest. i would still resubmit my last three chapters if the pics did eventually arrive, but sadly that doesn't look like happening now, thanks to your unwelcome comment. Sara... i love your art and lots of people share that opinion. rant over

Hi Prue
I've just read the final part of your story, and I have to say how happy i was with how it all came out.
You have a great talent and I hope you keep up the good work.
I'm glad you dropped the artwork in the last parts of the story, the artwork was very poor and really did nothing to add to the story.
You write really well and don't need to spoil your work with that tacky artwork that was in the first three parts.

Keep up the good work.

A Happy Reader

Having previously commented on this story, I don't know what else to say, except that this story is vintage Prue. It is solidly written, with polished, living characters, and the plot moves along nicely. I think it's a real crowd pleaser.

Highly recommended.

Mr Man

<<  His foray into dresses started innocently enough, from when he was asked to play a female in a play when they were short handed. ... Steve, (as they called him) had agreed, although dubious, that he would make a passable female, was surprised when he saw himself en femme for the first time. That experience had woken something in him that wouldn't go back in the box.  >>

Prue, this is amazing!  This is exactly what happened to me, although, unfortunately, not till I was 52, and I have become a very happy CD instead of a TS.  Just like in our stories, the costume lady who was making me over wouldn't let me look in the mirror till she was all done.  When I looked, I saw a man in a dress, but also a hell of a lot better looking woman than I ever expected.  It was an epiphany.  My one thought was, "I have GOT to find some way to do this again!"  And I did.  This is a great story; you go, girl!  

The new part of Transfer is as wonderful as the rest

Hugs da Prue,

As usual, you have a great piece working again.  Please do me a big favore and keep that clever brain transfering ideas to the fingertips.

Misty

Prue
I just finally got back to read this story and it definitly appears to be one of your best.I love how you used you style to include so many elements in story.You are truly one of the few here that could incorporate some many elements in your story and still maintain that wonderful style of making the reader feel the roles that I've always loved in your stories.Thank you very much for the privalege of reading your fine work once again.
kimmie

Kia ora, Prue,

I just read all of the 3 parts right through tonight, and it's a wonderful story. Very well plotted and quite well written, probably the best executed and believable body-swap I've read. You've really done a marvelous job of creating believeable, sympathetic characters in both Stephen and Stephanie.

I'll be waiting anxiously to see future installments of 'Transfer'. I hope it will continue to be as romantic and heart-warming as it has been so far.

Frilliette

very enjoyable story!   you couond end it with part 2 but I am glad to read that there will be a part 3!

(one suggestion in the following,

Evidence has been found that supports the defendant’s claim, so I’m holding Chad Whitlow on charges of theft, drug possession and having equipment used in the production of drugs for supply."

Try changin it to read
...   I find that the evidence presented supports the defendants testimony.  I am ordering Chad Whitlow placed into custody on charges...

It reads more legal that way!

Well done!   Take a bow!

Both a great reading story and well done art work. Keep on showing this level of talent in the future.

Prue knows I love this story, I have told her often enough as I have been privaliged to watch it grow.  Now though I have told the rest of the world...and I don't recomend many stories.

A good story, Prue at her best, though I am very biased...but with this story its easy to be biased.

Hypatia

Listen up readers.

This here story is a good one. It's a little darker than the author's previous work, but that's ok. Everything fits the tone of the story. There's nothing here to scare anyone away, so don't worry about giving this story a chance.

What the story boils down to is a little twist of fate, a strange event that leaves two lives forever changed. How they deal with their new situations is what makes this story interesting and compelling. Of course being a Prudence Walker story, you can count on it being well written, and full of surprises.

It also contains some really great story illustrations from the talented SaraUK. I'm sure you'll find they add to the story, complimenting it nicely.

So there you have it folks, Transfer is a good story and I highly recommend it.

So what are you still doing here reading my boring words?

Go read Transfer!

-Mr. Man

This is another AMAZING story from the talented keyboard and incredibly inventive mind of a wonderful person.  When I first met Prue, SHE insisted that _I_ begin to write, which I did.  I, in turn, insisted that SHE write and, after some time to get used to the idea, SHE did.  The result?  The student surpasseth the teacher.  Prue has become an amazingly prolific and VERY good writer.  I'm proud to know her and I'm blown away by her talent.  You done good, Prue......again.

                        Huggles from Cathy_t_