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The Transformation
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Comment by cheap oem software on 02/12/12
1WHtXq Sent the first post, but it wasn't published. I am writing the second. It's me, the African tourist. Comment by Silvia. on 10/12/10 Bad,bad,bad! Comment by gj on 03/14/10 good story kind of defferent ending.it was good touch too make up forthe stupid victem. Comment by Mistress Meredith on 12/16/08 Hmm . . . interesting tale. I do hope Rose is happy with her new home and life -- Edwina and Louuise have certainly created a marvelous business for themselves (and Joan). Nicely told. Comment by juliej on 04/14/07 what a way to go and what a set up welldone this has been a reread for me brilliant Comment by juliej on 02/10/06 a great story reread agin i feel that you could have gone further with this one but a great story thankyou Comment by Jezzi Stewart on 09/10/05 The ending of this story made me so mad that I contacted Anyport and he gave me permission to write a sequel. Read "I'm Baaack!" at my page here at Crystal's. Comment by julie j on 03/26/05 i wonder whether they drug him &he then finds out when he wakes up his situation it could make a great further addition to this story well done more please the story has a lot of backbone to it and i feel it could be advanced further Comment by julie j on 03/26/05 this story has a wicked ring to it imagine how ross will feel when hew finaly finds out if i weree hime i would be very upset i wonder whether they druge him &he then finds out when he wkes up his situation it could make a great further addition to this story well done more please Comment by julie on 02/27/04 poor ross did not know what he was letting himself in for what a set up and he fell for it hook,line&sinker, i dread to think how he will react when he finds out he has been sold to a sheik, and they are lining up there next victim already, brilliant story could have gone on a lot longer |
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