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Transformation Assembly Line
by Ian Elliott

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Comment by bronwyn girl on 09/14/12
As I have made a comment before I have reread the story and enjoyed
it for a second time. I cannot wait for the next part and hope you
could send me a copy



Comment by bronwyn girl on 01/02/12
I loved this story and cannot wait for the rest of it.Especially to see what happens to the latest captive.what a clever and novel idea.thanks

Comment by Silvia. on 05/14/11
DISGUSTING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Comment by juliej on 05/19/07
this story is very devolis &devious what a way to go assembly line indeed well what else can one say its a great piece of writing that need to be continued i am very interstd in this it showswhat relatations will do to get money he will wind up being a slave girl &possibly sold to a mistress what a way to go more please

Comment by Jessica Lovell on 03/30/07
please i hope you will continue i cant wait for the next chapter.

Comment by rhiann on 07/13/06
brianna -please continue with your sexy - devilishly deliteful story.  such a turn on - kisses dear

Comment by cassandra on 06/30/06
I quite agree. You surely should continue!! :-)

Comment by a friend on 06/24/06
you better continue!  :-)



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