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Transformed From a Macho-man
by Susan Petty 2000

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Comment by Dianna on 04/13/08
Quotation marks are desperately needed sugar. But I feel like some of the reactions were forced. No anger for being set up. Remorse later for what he did later would have been appropriate, but anger now at being hurt by them.

Comment by AngelCD on 08/21/07
Susan

Loved the story  I would have has a hard time choosing between the two guys and Jane his soon to be wife  LOL.  Can't wait to read the rest of them

Hugs
Angel


Comment by Jane Hudson on 09/27/04
My dear Loved it the bit with the boys sound like fun



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