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Transformer Corporation
by Patricia Pendragon

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Comment by Reader on 02/27/01
Excellent story building. Looking forward to further installments.
Thank you.

Comment by Paula Jutras on 02/18/01
another terrific part to the story. Look forward to the great hopes and plans for the future

Comment by Nellie D on 01/12/01
An interesting concept for change. a good story overall.

Comment by Neo on 01/12/01
Thought it was a captivating read.  Can't wait to see what happens next.

Neo

Comment by Paul jutras on 01/12/01
excellent piece of work. Love the story concept and think that it even might make a good universe if you wanted to do stories of different transformed employees in the company.



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