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Transformers (Sort Of)
by Cathy_t

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Comment by Chuck on 04/22/21
Really loved the story. But itís been a few years. You really need to finish it and put us out of our misery.

Comment by Silvia. on 07/14/11
I mean, end of the STORY. Sorry my bad english.
Kisses again.

Comment by Silvia. on 07/14/11
Hi Cathy.
I know I'm wasting time, words, and my poor and bad english.
But if you read this at any time, you should know you are not being fair with your readers.
We all are waiting the end of the sory.
If you read this at any time, please, think about it!
You are an amazing writer, and you know this.

Comment by Pippa K. on 02/20/05
Really enjoyed the latest chapter!  It had been a while since the last one, so I reread that first.  Enjoyed that again, too!  This is a fun story.  Looking forward to the next chapter, now.  Keep up the great work, Cathy!

Comment by Vince on 08/30/04
Good Read....Hope part 3 was just skipped as a glitch...
Wouldn't want to miss any of the action...


Comment by Early June on 08/19/04
As usual, you are doing a wonderful job of story telling.  This is a fine tale with full fledged, three dimensional characters.  You have created all kinds of opportunity for different tacks the story can follow.  Nice twist requiring the "suits" to recharge periodically. Great technique. good plot. nice devices. Needs a little editing.  Thank you for sharing this excellent essay with us.

Comment by Toni on 08/18/04
Hi Cathy, You sure are into this bodysuit thing. Quite a bit different than Holly, but still very well thought out and enjoyable. Keep up the good work, I look forward to reading more.

Comment by Sharlee Snyder on 08/14/04
Thank you Cathy!  This morning, I needed a good story to start my day, and you came through in spades.  You write VERY well, and your story has all the requisite things necessary to make-up a good read.  Your talent is exceptional.  I look forward to reading, "the rest of the story!"--Sharlee

Comment by Starhawk on 08/14/04
So far so good.  I like the idea that they have to recharge their suits every so often.  It puts a limit on what they can do and for how long.  The characters, and their attitudes towards their condition is coming along well too.

Keep up the good work.

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