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The Transformation of Rachael
by Rachael Anne

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Comment by link building on 09/06/13
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Comment by Silvia. on 09/04/11
Disgusting and sickly.

Comment by Douglas Hurd on 08/16/08
Fantastic story. The sexiest one I've read on here, and that's saying something. Brilliantly detailed, with the clothing and punishment descriptions particularly ravishing. Please, keep up the great work x

Comment by Helena on 08/16/08
I didn't think this story was cruel and if there are any training vacancies I would be interested! Helena TV

Comment by CATHY ANGELA DAVIS on 07/17/08
THIS WAS A CRUEL STORY, I UNDERSTAND THE TRAINING BUT BEING CRUEL IS NOT NECESSARY, IF YOU ARE GOING TO BE CRUEL DO IT TO THE CHARACTERS THAT DESERVE IT, THE MISTRESSES AND JOHN AND THE COLLEGE STUDENTS.

Comment by Dianna on 04/23/08
I like how you illustrated that abuse wasn't tolerated, I'm glad that she was happy in the end.

Comment by juliej on 12/09/06
a shock indeeed a very heaver story to read need to re read again

Comment by David on 09/01/06
I am shocked! I am aware that I am able to turn off and go elsewhere for my reading pleasure but someone reccommended your site to me.

 I just can't believe that this is how you and your obviously ardent fans reward true love!!!! Then you say that all is well because this is what 'HE' wanted. What rot! After all he went through his poor brain was quacamole!
 If any women tried this with me I would knock her out and sell HER to an Arabian Shiek or something. How would you all react to that! Well think about it...What is the difference?
  GOD! I now have a totally different view of women. I think I will write some stories about men doing the same thing to women. I'll bet that would get your goat eh?
 Jeez, now I have to really watch myself around women, since I really use to love, honor and cherish them. I quess that in YOUR universe that would make me a candidate for your reverse 'LOVE'. Maybe I should start hating and beating them up eh! Just to be on the safe side!!!!! GOD! I have to go Puke!

                       Totally Disgusted


Comment by JahnAnA on 04/11/06
an outstanding story that held my interest until the very end.removingtypographical errors would improve the presentation.

Comment by Sally/Ron on 01/23/05
I was in awe of the story..what a great experience. To be used like that, given breasts, taken by men and women against my will....so wonderful, and I loved the corsets and the forced fellatio.
I want this to happen to me

Comment by julie j on 10/27/04
a heavy story very wellwritten and described  the wedding was a bit much but this is the life he had chosen well done

Comment by matt on 03/11/04
this story is my dream. i wld love to be in that situation.
cant wait for the next episode.

Comment by julie on 03/31/03
the story is very good and it was enjoyable I would like to read more but to have included in the story in the dungeon part something based on a lockable cage

Comment by julie on 03/31/03
an excellent story good writing more please I would also like to read some stories with the use of a cage or cell structure

Comment by Bonnie on 01/18/03
What a wonderful story!  You must write more of them. I was absolutely transfixed and couldn't take my eyes from it.  I am a new visitor to this site and I have entered your name in a document file I keep of authors so I'll know whom to look for in the future.

Again, Bravo!

Comment by Donna on 12/20/02
I too loved the story, but my compuer has a spell-check and error check facility that I use to correct unnecessessary mistakes - ever thought of trying it?

Comment by JACK on 08/28/02
READ YOUR STORY AND LIKED IT THANKS,LOOKING FORWARD TO READING MORE BY YOU. THANKS!!

Comment by Dyl on 04/05/01
Rachael,
Your story sent me over the top, so to speak.  Anxiously look forward to future works.
Best Regards,
Dyl

Comment by broni on 01/08/01
Rachael, this is a wonderful story. I look forward to more. broni

Comment by yvette fillette on 01/05/01
i adore your story and eagerly await your next.


                                              Thank you,

                                              yvette

Comment by MartiB on 01/02/01
An interesting and very readable story.  

Comment by Patricia on 01/01/01
Enjoyed your story very much. Thankyou Pat



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