I enjoyed this story.  What happened to Hal is indeed chilling, and I would have liked to have seen him fight more.  For me the complete memory wipe style of stories are always unhappy endings.  Of course there's nothing wrong with that if that's what you're going for.

I just love office body swap stories. Great job and please write more stories like this one.

well done, the way the memories  gradually took over was both funny & chilling. One thing, I think that the new Hal should have said somewhting, maybe I will find a sweet kind, sexy woman to be my wife!

I used to enjoy your stories, but these magic-body swap tales are getting as predictable and stale as day-after thanksgiving turkey.

Good story.  In this case, One could say that Hal committed suicide. For a supposedly smart man he was pretty stupid to fall for the "Please don't throw me in the briar patch" routine.  I would guess, though, that Rachel may have outfoxed herself.  I bet it's pretty hard to stay on guard all the time NOT to access the memories in ones head.  Hal may be back  :-)

Not bad, but there needed to be more conflict. You should have gave the guy at least a small chance to get his life and company back. It would have made for better reading if we didn't know for sure what was going to happen.