YWBokN Major thankies for the article post.Really thank you! Want more.

Ok old MaryKay9.
The story isn't bad!
The story is VERY,VERY BAD!!!

Old Silvia writes bad story on pretty much every story!  As usual, Silvia is wrong again.

MaryKay9

Bad story!
Silvia.

yes, it is a story. I am courious, where did you get the idea that this murder of minds was a sweet/sentimental story?  the way it is written is the authors choice of course, just that a better choice to describe this is a horror story.

To have a way to transform men into women they could make a fortune legally !!! with more than enough male customers willing to pay.

an excellent story I would have liked a bit more enforcement it seem to easy to fall into a trap like that i would like to see some more of this story perhaps another male visitor arrived but was imune to the spray and had to be over come by force held in the cellars of the house while he figured a way out but failed and in the end after a lot of problems and hard work finally sucumbed to the charms of the dominant woman it would make a more interesting story rather than just easy as the first 3 it would spice it up a lot please consider  another part to this story otherwise a goodstory

story was good but needs a new endng this one sucked

This is a wonderful story and fits right in with the fantasy tales that most of these stoies envolve. Some may say no this can't happen but that is not what is truely important here.

The real test is do you like the authors style and writing? And that is a  big yes!

I would love to find this stuff that they use to turn the guys into lovely girls. Oh, that would save me so much money I'd love to try it.

But, we do know they haven't perfected it yet so just enjoy the story for what it is and have a wonderful read. It derserves to be read.

Diane

If this is anyones real fantasy, it is a suicide/death fantasy.  Realize that these women have killed Marcus.  There is no Marcus left to either enjoy or not enjoy the transformation.  This would not, it seems to me, be a package that a woman who wanted to dominate, humiliate, or get revenge on a male would want.  Where's the pleasure if your victim doesn't know what's going on?

I agree that there has to be some disbelief here.  But that is what fiction, especially sissy, fiction is all about.  I loved the story and can just imagine being in the clutches of some dominant women who change me into the girl I always wanted to be.  Thanks Annalise.  I await another lovely story.

An okay story, I guess, but the suspension of disbelief was too great, really. I mean, the police must have known exactly where and when he went missing, at least they knew he went to that house and never returned, and if that wasn´t enough, they lose a second (or was that third) officer in the same house. You would have to be dealing with the worst police force in the world to expect to get away with something like this.