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Trapped
by Margaret Jeanette

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Comment by Silvia. on 10/27/09
I agree completely with Jezzi!
Very bad story you wrote.
Silvia.

Comment by Jezzi Stewart on 10/20/05
I didn't like this one.  The fact that she was willing to blackmail him when he had done nothing to deserve it says a whole lot about her character ... it's bad, and you write him as a decent guy.  No matter whether he liked the feminization or not,  I don't see how he could love a woman that ruthless, selfish, and unconcerned about others.

Comment by julie j on 01/03/05
well thought out and what a set up he went to far but ended up married to his wife but as the wife what a way to go great story



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