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Trapped in a Box
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Comment by Lee on 12/19/12
Sandy did what every woman that has gone into every store in the mall, try on half of the clothes in the place then buy nothing at all. Comment by Silvia. on 04/06/10 What a bad and sad story you wrote. Comment by tim naismith on 06/22/06 and all the men i know or ever knew keeps there wallet in there pants Comment by tim naismith on 06/22/06 i live in edmonton and can see something like that happening,and i thought it was a GREAT storie Comment by Peg_Thebois on 04/03/03 Nellie D, interesting take on what would have happened except for one thing, I can't speak for everyone but most guys I know carry their wallet in their jacket, not in their pants pocket, most often in an inside pocket of their jacket at that. Allow me quote from the story itself, Comment by Nellie D on 04/03/03 Well the writing wasn't too bad,i.e. fairly good. The story overall was fair. The women were a little on the cruel side, possibly harming him mentally for a long time. And the security woman takes the tape home to get off on but doesn't come to his aid. This is the author's fantasy so it is as it is. |
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