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Travel A Broad
by Jennifer White

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Comment by is cbd legal in washington dc on 06/30/21
L0BkNz You can definitely see your enthusiasm in the work you write. The world hopes for more passionate writers like you who are not afraid to say how they believe. Always follow your heart.

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Comment by Cassandra on 12/12/11
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Comment by Chelsea on 02/24/08
Author's note: the story's protagonist's career and her subsequent 'sale' to a man are practices which are offensive and should never be condoned. However, with men's insatiable appitite for sex, and the fact that they are seemingly incapable of being true to one women, there is a constant 'need' for women in the sex trade. This barbaric practice is illegal, immoral, and I in no way want to glamorize it or condone it...for real women. For feminized men however (particularly ones who are changed against their wishes), it seems like perfect poetic justice. A small way to make up for the millenia of injustice to women...

Is this some kind of joke or do you actually feel this way? Are you trying to degrade being a woman down to being humiliation and a punishment? Shouldn't being a woman be something wonderful, something that you can enjoy because it is who you are. Yes it's hard, and very tough and rough at times ((Especially with the cramps T_T)) but I wouldn't trade it for anything in the world. Also, since you think being forced is right and just, maybe someone should forcibly masculinize you or something, my girlfriend went through that, it's not pretty I can assure you. No one should EVER be forced to be something they aren't, never ever EVER. It leaves them destroyed and extremely suicidal, my friend who was forcibly turned into a girl, dreams of death every day, and fantasizes about killing himself, I haven't seen him in a while, he may of already killed himself, but I pray instead that he found peace in his soul.


Comment by Jane  Hudson on 04/01/04
Great story loved it



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