Had to reread this one,Great!!

I really liked this one . Great story line yummy!!

Now this is what i like in a story. it just makes me so hot so submissive to the story
you did very well

not the end you cnnot leave us up in the air like this more please i would like to read about all his training &punishments with a lot mor bondage please

this sissy liked your story vary much, a little more of the bondage would be nice. otherwise sissy thinks you should be proud.

the end i most certanly hope not i would like to hear more about the story and transformation and some rebellion when he realise this situation will be permanant, i would like to read about md diamonds dungeon and how she controlled him as personalslaves theie is a lot more scor this story and i hope and pary ellen you continue with it

Dear Ellen:
I like what you have done so far. I hope subsequent chapters will satisfy the questions raised.  I would be interested in seeing how our heroine and her spouse finally escape the foul clutches of the vile villaines.  Your method of narrating is straight forward and entertaining.  You created a very tangible scene. I can see where a naive person might hire someone of that ilk to provide a surprise for their spouse.  But your ending turned the tables and made it a completely different story. Well Done.

Loved your story and would like to see a continuation of it. It was well written and held my interest (and made me envious of Ellen). What a lucky person to have a wife like you who has a friend like Ms. Diamond.
Sincerely,
Germane

And this "slavery" is supposed to make him happy???????

This story really sent mixed messages to me.  Was the husband a nice guy or a selfish jerk?  Was Bonnie really giving him a gift out of love or getting revenge on him?  Is Ms. Diamond a friend or enemy of the wife?

This is a nice story and hope it doesn´t end there, would love to see the two of them servicing Ms Diamond. Keep it up and continue with it!Actually this story reflects so much my own situation where my wife knows of my desires but doesn´t want to fulfill them. Heck, as far as I know my wife´s friend isn´t Ms Diamond.

hugs and kisses, sissy camila

Nicely done.  Great start to this tale.  I want to see where it winds up!  I like how you have Ellen recognizing that even though he's being "forced" into this that it is really his own desires being fulfilled.

Fran

Really like your writing style.  Would definitely like to see more of the story.  Would like to know how Lisa thinks she can get away with what amounts to kidnapping, etc.  Does Bonnie have secret desires?  And, if so, why has she been keeping them secret from her husband.  Anyway, I am enjoying it.  Please continue.