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Trial Run
by Jennifer Jane Pope

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Comment by Aurora on 12/11/04
Excellent, really enjoyed it, more please

Comment by Vanna Jean Russell on 05/20/01
Please hurry and finish.  I am dying, but in heels and hose, to know what happens next.

Love your stories.  Thanks

Comment by Jackie on 02/11/01
Loved your story. Please finish.  I'm and old duffer and I like to read a good story with and adult plot.  You have succeded in giving us a good story line and a good description of Kenny's transition to Lucy.  Keep up the good work and finish the story.  Thanks.

Comment by Prue on 02/10/01
Well I FINALLY got round to reading your story lol . what can i say? all the great words have all been used "ah i know, i'll make my own up."its fabulisous  a very moo-ving story lol i'll pat you on the back(not a cow pat either lololoolol) huggles jenny cant wait for more

Comment by joann on 02/10/01
hey, great plot,,, I can see where he's gonna get in deeper and deeper,,,, hiding in plain sight as it were.  Good character development, the strength of the girls, the macho of the cops.  Poor kenny slipping deeper into lucy.... Keep going  please..



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