QypzNJ Thanks for sharing this great piece. Very inspiring! (as always, btw)

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yMH00E Very neat article.Really thank you! Fantastic.

I am enjoying the story but felt compelled to comment on part 4 . I think the entire sex scene with Jerry was unbelievable and unnecessary it did nothing for the story .....that is my opinion at any rate .It was a bit harsh for an otherwise sentimental story (Sandy should be killed in here somewhere and Amy should have seen her for what she was from the start .....LOL LOL Ok I couldn't resist  thanks for a great time .

Stephen J  

PulyOQ I truly appreciate this article post.Much thanks again. Great.

CzLnlK I really enjoy the article.Really looking forward to read more. Cool.

1BhMMW I value the article.Really looking forward to read more. Fantastic.

good story so far will come back to read final parts later

good start will read part 2 nextime

I thought that you wrote avery good story.  Thank you John

This is in response to Catherine Robertson:  Those who can, do.  Those who can't, critique.  And those that can't do either, critique critics.

It is incredible to be able to read this wonderful set of stories again since I read it several years ago.

I miss the humor, the pathos, the subtleties, the play of contrasts & tension.

Many, many thanks!

This is a response to O. Windhurst. " those who can, do those who can't, critique"

Not bad.  The story line was well developed and coherent, at least until the party episode.  I felt the party tale was anticlimactic, and the author, desperate to somehow add spice to that chapter, pulled the previously unintroduced character of Dr. Albert into a highly improbable rape scene.  (Come now, the head of the department?)By the standards of this site, Enigma writes quite well.  Some lapses in grammar (the object of a preposition should be in the objective case, e.g., "me" not "I."), spelling, and punctuation.  (Does no one proofread their work before pushing the send button?)
Nevertheless, an engaging story.  I would prefer that my fiction be plausible (Extreme corseting without discomfort, and drastic waist reduction to 19 inches in a few weeks? Please!  You wish!) but overall, the yarn held my attention.  Enigma is not without writing talent.  I would be pleased to read more of his/her work.

The best story I have ever read on this site. So moving and real. Please send more. Thank You.

Unreal story.  One of the very best I have ever read here.  It had my emotions all over the place.  On the one hand I wanted to tell Amy to dump Sandy.  She obviously is no friend, in my opinion.  As for James/Jamie I can only say that he one heck of a trooper.  He is put through so much int his story and his mind is sent spinning from the get go.  Amazing he remained sane at all.  

This story has real depth and I am glad to see that you have part 2 in the queue.  I am going to read it now.

Many thanks for one of the best.

Cheers.

Starhawk

 Good story but Sandy is a hartless bitch who would distroy anyone she feels threatened by. I think Amy should pump Sandy full of male hormones. Then when its all over. She can smile sweetly and say Trick or Treat. But then Amy's a big wimp.

I have really enjoyed this story! It is so well written and erotic but in a very nice way. I do hope that James does finally become Jamie and lives happily ever after with Paul.

More please!

Now that I have read all 5 chapters, I just want to commend you on an excellent story.  While the premise required some suspension of disbelief, the story was very well told, the reactions of the characters to various developments was right on and everything was very well written.  With the multitude of developments this will be a very satisfying story for all readers containing elements that will resonate well with all sectors of Storysite readership.

I look forward to reading of further adventures in Part 2.  Keep up the terrific work!

SS

Fantastic, cant't wait until I read part 5. This is a well written story and a good plot. Keep it coming

Excellent work.  This is one of the better stories of this type I've ever read.  

Dear Enigma
 Thanks for a great story! It is keeping me on tender hooks waiting for each new section. Jaime's character is evolving in an intriguing manner. The options open in her development seem to be wide ranging. I don't know exactly why but Sandy is a dark figure in my mind. For a well educated MD, Amy seems to be an easily led wimp. Hope I'm wrong but thanks for a great story.
Another Brian

Congratulations!! this is shaping up into a wonderful story.

I'd like more on the hairstyling and make-up side - how much can the boy do for himself - let's have him enjoy another salon session and give us all the details please!

Love & huggs

Ginger

A WONDERFUL STORY. WELL WRITTEN. YOU MUST HAVE PUT IN A LOT OF TIME IN PREPARING FOR IT AND AM CERTAINLY LOOKING FORWARD FOR MANY MORE CHAPTERS.

I really enjoyed this story. It has a great story line that in these days is quite possible. I'm both anticipating and looking forward to the 3 episode. Thanks for taking the time to provide this entertainment.

the story was great well written &decribed please hurry with the next part dont keep us in supence long please

Really enjoyed the story. I think Amy is so into transvestism that she and Sandy came up with a way she could get what she really wants, a transexual lover. I feel Jamie will never return to being a man. I also feel Sandy will end up with twin identical lover. After all isn't this what every man or lesbian lover wants( I know I sure would. Keep this sexy story going. Turn it into a novel. "Great Work"         Dave

Looking forward to the next part. The suspense is killing me! :)

like the story but not many guys would do it and the friend has been cold to him think if was average guy the last wor would be off xx

I agree with Sassy Sue; I don't trust Sandy.  I look forward to part 2.  

Very nicely done!  While Amy's motives are far-fetched and Jamie's "spur of the moment" decision to make the change is more so, I find that I care about these characters -- a great rarity in TG fiction.  That alone scores big points.  The Sandy/Amy-Jamie tension is a great literary device.  We know we want a happy ending, and Sandy is the eminence gris who both facilitates and threatens that denoument.  The best compliment, of course, is that I am impatiently awaiting the next installment!  

I have to agree with SassySue that Sandy for all her professionalism and plausibility is up to no good whatever (or up to her own good whatever the cost to others), and I suspect that Amy is so innocently credulous that she's as duped as she is loving.  But that may merely be because the transformation is founded on so flimsy a premise.  It's well-set-up to be believable, just, so no complaint!  The affection between the two is marevelously reassuring and the utter lack of cross-gender desire on Hubby's part makes for wonderful anticipations as he gets further and further into being an attractive woman.  When the party finally happens, will he discover as "Amy" that Amy too has had other additional motives (and maybe lovers?).  No, the third person narrative stretches seem to preclude that.  Whatever, this is an ambitious story beautifully under way!  

A very nice start, please continue...

Very nice story.  The love and affection between husand and wife is palpable.  However, Amy's motivation for so radically transforming her loving husband is weak and not fully believable.  Sandy is probably up to no good, but I suppose we will find out for sure in future installments, which I eagerly await.

Keep up the good work!

SS