I would love to read a happy ending for Jaime. She deserves it.

This is by far the most well thought out and written story on this site.
Even though Jamie was the victim from the start, I had kinda hoped that things would work out for her.

But it was not to be and I cried for her. From the first paragraph,  you could tell that the only thing James wanted was the love of his wife. All through the story, even as he was changing for her, it was for love that he chose to do so.

And I must agree (well sorta) that Sandy and Amy both should have been punished some how. I don't mean turning them into men. That would have been unrealistic and would have destroyed the flow and flavor of this story.

The true sad thing about this story is the realism.

I truly hope that you write more or another story. Is there more out there???

Wow!  I remember a couple of years ago reading this story before you added the last two parts.  Just lately I found that you finally added these so I excitedly read them.

Again,wow.  What a tough finish!  But, I after thinking on it realize that this is actually for the most part is how most marriages end when the man turns into a woman. Or of course the other way around.

In a way I almost felt betrayed as I had expected a happy ending as most stories are wrote that way in a fictional setting but I am glad that you ended it this way really. It brought my head out of the clouds so I say thank you for that. You see I am trans sexual and have to realize that I may never actually marry a man as I just cannot bring myself to be dihonest enough to let any man keep thinking that I was born a genetic female! I just can't do it! But, I do have a fantastic companion that I live with who is also trans. We however only live as sisters which is just fine and it is probably much better that way anyway. We are often accused of being genentic sisters.  That's also fine and probably much safer with people thinking such.

I think though that it would be neat if you was to rewrite the ending as an added part so the readers could have a choice in how they would like their ending of this story to end. An added bonus if you will.
I think that you would probably have less people complaining if they had a choice in endings to read. Also it would be a unique thing for story site.

Other wise I thought that it was a great story and well written. Keep up the good work ok.

                   

                        Vivien

that is the worst story I've ever read.
You're sick.
Annah.

Oh how terribly sad! I cried buckets with your tale, and can't help but feel devastated at the utter loss of Jamie. She lost all! The only thing left is second-hand involvement. No children. No (soul)mate to hold on to. Totally alone. Oh how sad, so sad!

Yet so well written. Gawd, I feel for her.

Jo-Anne

I read your story, and I think, Jamie don't deserve this fate.
I agree with Silvia, Amy and Sandy must be punished.
Why don't punish Amy and Sandy?
Thank you.
Eva.

Why Amy and Sandy didn't be punished?
both deserve the worst punishment in all world forever,
until they die.
Why don't you turn they into men, without chance to turn back?
If they try turn back into womanhood, they must die.
And give back Jamie's child.
Please, promisse me to think about this!
I really feel bad with Jamie's destiny.
She doesn't deserve this, she isn't guilty, but Amy and Sandy,they are guilty.
Kisses.
Silvia.

I'm utterly speechless at how good you wrapped up this story not that its ended yet or is it? but either way thank you for the many happy/sad times.  expect to see more one day

This entire story was and is very touching, happy, sad, happy and then sad at the end due to Jamie being the only one not find her new love. She deserve more, so please write a loving ending for her. Thanks, J-Lynn

When I read the first parts of this story several years ago, I was torn.  I tried really hard to like Amy because Jamie loved her so deeply.  But I felt that she didn't really understand what she was doing to Jamie or what she stood to lose until Jamie ran away.

Now with the story coming to a close, I'm glad that much of that was resolved and I understand how the author was conflicted about the direction the story went.  (They do that, you know, they rarely follow your careful plotting... :) )

But what happens to Jamie?  She still is a very conflicted soul.  She gives so much of herself to ensure that those she loves find happiness, but at the end, her happiness is in the future, if then.

What a rollercoaster!!!
Let's find Jamie some happiness and real closure.
Thanks for your efforts; good job.

Excellent Story!!  

Sandy won, Amy lied and Jaime paid the ultimate price.

I hope you add one more segment and complete the novel where Jaime can get her heart back and be a peace.  She appears to miss Amy immensely and needs loving!

Tom

I haven't finished reading these two new parts, but I just have to stop for a second & tell you how grateful I am that you continued these stories!!

I've read many stories, not just tg, but your series has been one of the deepest & bittersweet for me. It was as if I found a whole reality that somehow matched up with my own inner realities.

And, it's been as if I've been given the chance to return to that place in my heart.

Thank-you!

Whew!  This is perhaps the most soul-searching story I have read, anywhere.
You have a pleasant and flowing style (with excellent spelling and grammar) that makes it difficult to stop reading.
I particularly like the interactions between the various participants, maintaining a certain suspense that clears only in the closing paragraphs.
Thank you, and I wish you a Happy New Year.
Geoff