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The Trip
by Leann Lee

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Comment by chocopie on 12/20/18
e3pKQQ It was really informative. Your site is extremely helpful.
Comment by lee lee on 12/24/07
OH now I like this story   the 69 training was wonderful but how did they stay like that when they had to pee?  hmmmmmm   I would like to find out if they are going to be trained in that too.  This story needs MORE   I have an erection but the story ended    Who are the clients   do the sissies get hormnones  do they then become dommes too  
Comment by Danielle on 12/18/07
Hi.

  May I ask how these three 'boys' chose to go to this school or was it chosen for them?

  Just a tad confused. It does say 'forced' in the bio.

Comment by kiko on 12/17/07
great story look forward to the next chapter
Comment by Leann on 12/10/07
Hey everyone,
thank you all for your wonderful comments.

Pammy dearie,
unfortunately storysite doesn't upload stories until 3 months later after submission. so if i submit part 3 now, you will need to wait quite a bit longer for it. Haven't started writing part 3 yet as well. =(
will get on it soon though.

kisses and hugs,
Leann

Comment by Pam on 12/08/07
Leann Sweetie,

That was absolutely a great second chapter.....please continue, and I hope we don't have to wait 3 more months for chapter 3, OK??

loved it!!

Pammy xoxo

Comment by juliej on 12/06/07
intersting story more please
Comment by Cheryl C on 09/20/07
Oo-er..Luv it! Pls don't make us wait too long for the rest of the story!
Comment by juliej on 09/18/07
a good story to start whwen is part 2 due
Comment by JodieLynne on 09/15/07
Nice story, but where is Part 2?
Please continue

JodieLynne

Comment by Reader on 09/09/07
I love it.  Please continue the story
Comment by Angela E. on 09/08/07
Yes,very promising.Please write more.
Comment by Sarah H. on 09/07/07
Nice beginning,please continue with it.


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