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Trouble In Paradise
by Jennifer White

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Comment by Roland on 10/17/09
Keeps getting better every time.
Thanks for writing.

Comment by lee  lee on 06/03/08
Oh Jen  it could be a real story In fact it has happened several times. Although yout timeline and physical changes are not accurate the story was wonderful. I read where a wife did this to her macho guy and when he finally found out  beat the crap out of her. He had been on them for two years and was a weight lifter so the boobs were not the problem but although his cock stayed hard his ball  almost shrunk to nothing   and that is irreversible!  My wife on the other hand very up front gave me her hormones when I told her I wanted boobs  she quit though after six months when my mood swings and depression made the fun stop   silicon is just as nice  !!!!!!

Comment by juliej on 07/22/07
a great story of revenge well done

Comment by don(na?) on 10/18/06
Another great story.  At least now I understand why my wife is ever trying to feminize my clothes.

Comment by julie j on 01/02/05
these gems are getting better all the time but his wife is so devious they way she swopped his vitamins around for birth control pills and other things a very intresting and a lesson learnt the hard way

Comment by TinaCortina on 06/04/04
Another little gem - it amazes me how they come off the assembly line so regularly.  Beautifully crafted, often with a nice little turn at the end.  This was a nice one, I like it when there is no mystery or magic, just plain old realism.  Thanks Jennifer for writing so much.

Love Tina xx



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