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The Trouble with Patrick
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Comment by Silvia (from Brazil) on 02/01/10
I couldn't write a comment better than trying to understad wrote. Comment by Anasta'cia Mystik on 02/22/09 Dear Patricia Comment by Trying to understand on 02/06/09 This was total garbage, filth and porno. In no way was this a good story. First, it was full of mispelled words showing the ignorance of the author. Second, the mindset of the author is revealed in a sister doing this to her brother and the oral sex was revolting. The author should be totally ashamed. This was definitely not entertaining and should be removed. If this is the best the author can do.......it time to quit. Get an education and learn how to spell, with spell check most of the errors could be fixed. A good proof reader could catch the errors. Think before you write or is that too hard. On a scale of 1 to 10 and 10 being the best, this story rates a minus 50. Comment by juliej on 03/10/08 i have read part of this but got lost with the spelling mistakes it could be a great story but needs correction first Comment by ANtonia on 02/22/07 QUITE A NICE STORY, BUT A PITY ABOUT THE MANY STUPID SPELLING MISTAKES Comment by DeeDee Clark on 12/13/06
Comment by juliej on 11/19/06 the story is very hard to follow i think the story would be better if you re wrote it with the use of a spell checker then i could get the full feel of this and the story would be a lot better Comment by Rick Schmidt on 07/08/06 Nice sexy story...I would have liked to read that Patricia went a bit further with her boyfriends...also, invest in a good spell checker next time Comment by julie larue on 12/09/04 nice story line, but i would have peobably bit the boys hard enough that they wouls have screamed, or grabbed thier balls hard, doing that makes the hardon go down. also use a spell checker befor submitting them Comment by julie j on 10/16/04 the storyline is good and the plot is wellwriten the only thing is that the spelling mistakes are very bad please use a spell checker next time otherwise very good story Comment by shy surfer on 09/23/03 I think you have a lot of potental, but like me, you could use some help spelling. Great story though. Comment by Henry on 07/31/02 good story, would have liked it better without the sex act. Please spell check your words on the next story before you publish it Comment by Reader on 07/06/01 Nice, but I would have gotten even with my sister if she ever set me up in the bathroom that way. Run your stories through a spell checker before publishing. |
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