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True Feelings
by Jennifer White

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Comment by John on 03/23/08
I saw a couple problems here.  First, what happened to the man's girlfriend?  Second, it seems like the TG-man has his period in the middle of his girl week.  Then he gets pregnant on the last day of that same week.  This seems very unlikely.

Comment by Kathryn on 03/20/08
Now that was a sweet little story. No evil magic or what not. Just a guy who learns that women are not all about sex. 50/10 in my rating.



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