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True Happiness
by Jennifer White

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Comment by Teresa Ann Wood on 06/02/07
Jennifer,
I have been a fan for some time and would love to hear from you. Please email me, it would be a great thrill.
Thanks!
Teresa
Comment by Danielle on 06/01/07
Jennifer,

  Wow! I was pleasantly surprised to read this very tender bitter-sweet love story. I enjoyed it, I actually did. This story shows that love can make anything possible. Too bad about the Girls missunderstanding. This young man trully gave everything for his love. Isn't it a shame that the road to hell is paved with good intentions.

  Not to be overly critical because this truly was a first for you and I applaud you for writing this story, however there is one sad point. Even after learning about his love and why he did what he did she showed no remorse for the mistake. That would have been the icing on this wonderful story if she had embraced him for his love and ensure that he would not live out his new life alone.

  All in all a very poignant love story with a twist. Well done!


    Danielle

Comment by alison on 06/01/07
oh Jennifer was this wonderful, i have waited to read such an article for a long time, please continue with these i have been a cd for a long time and really after reading this can see what you are trying to tell us, curtsy and thank you honey, alison


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