beautiful story

OMG. how sad this story was i could bearly finish it, and how oh so so SO crual that mean lady was i wanted 2cry half the time =( n i agree there should be some revenge...REVENGE served COLD. n e way nice story. Laters

an intrestion complimation the way it was done was wicked good well written story heavy to read you have o read it slowly

True Love:

I think the ending was heart warming, though I'd have gotten rid of his cock for good. Nice, easy to follow writing.

Gwen

i think there should have been some serious revenge in the end ,,all the people envolved in hurting them should have two or three years of painful punishment,,,a good doctor should have been able to restore him,,and dad should also recives some punishment also,,pain and hurt should always be revenged,,,life's not fair but there should always be a get even time....,,,...william

A finely conceived sex school narrative, one of the most impressive I've read.  Careless of detail and proofing, but structurally sound -- I loved the idea of mutuality of punishment and responsibility forcing each to train the other to these infidelities and perversions.  Wish I'd thoughta that!  The ending is too hasty and sketchy given the care given to the sex-school sequences, but I trusted that at the end there would be some sort of tie-in with the beginning, and lo, hoever crude, there it was.  You have a sensibility that deserves cultivation and care -- write more deliberately, and don't scurry!  Now I have to read Redemption!

He should have taken Jenny and walked out!  As soon as he could he should have tracked down the bitch and Co. that transformed him and wasted them all.  Then he should have gone after mom and cos.  Dad's punishment of them would have been comparatively mild, because, after all, he was a man and "she" was a woman now and we all know, as Kipling wrote, "The female of the species is more deadly than the male."