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Trust
by Jennifer White

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Comment by june on 06/26/11
i would have liked melissa to be all ready married maybe even to one of his friends, being that she gave up hope she settled for a man to get married to.

Comment by Silvia. on 02/26/09
I would like to know what you have against the men.
Women likes men!
Silvia.

Comment by early june on 01/05/06
Scary! Scary! Scary!  I suppose there are women as nasty as that.  I am glad I have never met them.  I know they would corrupt me.  Your imagination and variety of of twists oon the theme are incredible.  Thanks again for such a fine story.

Comment by JW Fan on 12/27/05
This is not a comment about this particular story, but about Jennifer White's stories in general.  I read her stories posted on Fictionmania a couple of years ago, and have re-read my favorites several times.  I though that was all there was.  I found her work here a short time ago and feel like I found a long lost treasure.

I have to say that I do not agree with her generalization that all men are pigs (a common theme through most of her stories).  Sure, some are, but a lot of us aren't.  On one hand, I'm sorry she's been jaded to the point that she feel this way.  On the other, she would not have blessed us with her talent if she hadn't.  Please keep writing.

Now, if you'll excuse me, I have some reading to do!

Comment by DB on 09/07/05
This one warrants a sequel --- with Revenge over the new Mark.  Perhaps our new heroine finds her body has some magical abilities left within it.  While she can not change back, she can cast a curse on the new Mark.   Say perhaps the new Mark finds everytime he lies his breasts get larger, while at the same time his penis only gets hard over anyone but the bride.  Whenever the penis get near her it shrinks to the size of a three year old.

Just a thought --- Please follow this one up.

Comment by Donna on 09/06/05
You have real style!  All your stories really grab and hold me...

Comment by Max on 08/30/05
Very good story, I think its your best. I saw the end coming but it was  still powerful.

Comment by JK on 08/30/05
Great story. Why not do more like this one rather than so many xxx ones?

Comment by Just a reader on 08/29/05
Have to say this is one of your best stories ever. The whole characterizations where perfect. All the reactions to various events were spot on. I am not a big fan of sweet endings. Like more of the stuck or a fool and his life are soon parted :) This story pushed all the right buttons. Thanks a ton for sharing your stories with the masses.

Comment by Jasper Lepew on 08/29/05
Fantastic!



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