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The Truth About Life
by Cathleen Elizabeth Hitch

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Comment by Silvia. on 05/20/11
I just want to know, where's the rest of the story???????????????????
Comment by solon on 06/12/03
This writer has a way with the queen's english, ya gotta admit! The opening scene, of the cd nailed to wall, was horrible, reminiscent of the movie 'seven' and soon there appears possible suspects, starting with Roger, the hero's partner (and father of heroine(?)....one suspects that THAT has to be too easy! This is a work in progress, and criticising it without letting the writer develop the talents necessary to respond to our criticism in a way that's helpful to her...well that says more about the critics then InnocentGuilt's story....which is fun to read.
Comment by Sharlee Snyder on 05/31/03
Cathleen,

Please do not let the no-talent (they are not published, are they) a******s (ah, a great non-gender specific term) keep you from telling us a story.  It's your story, and if these idiot's do not like your effort's, then they do not have to read them.  No one is pointing a gun at their head's.  It's not your work they dislike.  They hate everything and everyone in their nasty, critical non-productive live's.  My suggestion to them is to get a f****** life.  fortunately, my dear, you already have one and are sharing it with people who appreciate the attempt as well as the finished product.  It takes courage to do what you are doing, something your critiques wouldn't have any knowledge of.
Sharlee
Comment by Cabby on 02/05/03
This 'story' is somebody's idea of a joke, right?  It is so bad, its funny.
Comment by Nobodyatall on 01/17/03
You need some basic grammar and English lessons; perhaps English is a second language...

And the plot doesn't really make much sense. No descriptions or character development, just dialogue.

I'm sure that in your head, you know who these people are.  As the Author, you might want to fill us in.
Comment by Sofia on 01/15/03
I enjoyed reading your story, it's very Twin Peaks in a way.
Comment by Nora-Adrienne Deret on 12/22/02
While I do think the premise of your story is interesting. You really should have had it proofread and spell checked.  Your sentance and grammar structure are even worse then mine.  I won't even discuss your poor spelling.
Comment by Mary on 11/29/02
You have a interesting story going so far I hope to see more of it.


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