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Turbulence: Back to School
by Julie O

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Comment by Toni on 03/23/05
Another very enjoyable story Julie. You develop your characters so well and they seem so real that I forget that it is fiction. It reads more like a narration of their real lives. I really like the way you cross characters from one story to another. It makes them seem like one big happy family. I like long stories with happy endings. I look forward to reading more about all of them. Thanks again, Toni.

Comment by d on 03/03/05
wonderful story, great character developement, oozed with just the right amount of steam and sexitement. love the use of magic and working in enough explanation for the reader to enjoy the complexity of your story. could have had more penis sucubus sucking the essense out of the transformed women in the story but thats just my bad spelling and twisted take on things. i loved this work. do it again. use the same character in further magical adventures helping other newly transformed men to women fight off evil forces. its a very nice place to go at the end of a long day at the office. thank you.

Comment by Pippa K. on 03/03/05
Took me a few days, but I finally finished.  My eyes are still wet from the last scene!  Thank you, Julie.  What a great story!

Comment by Pippa K. on 02/27/05
After reading part 1, I'm hooked!  Julie, you do a great job of introducing the characters and situations in the first chapter.  I'm glad I read the previous stories, but strictly thinking, I don't think a reader who hasn't will be too lost for too long.  Just great stuff!  Okay, I'm going to read the rest of it now...



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