This was a yery sweet story. I especially liked the changes that came over the wife although I appreciate the fears that were present before the party.  Bravo

A VERY BEAUTIFUL LOVE STORY.WRITTEN WITH A GREAT SENSITIVITY.ENJOYED IT VERY MUCH.LOVED THE CHARACTERS.

    Your story was very warm and emotive. Left me feeling happy and content. I really, really love this story and am glad I came back to read it.  Been reading a lot of so, so stuff. This is one of the better stories on the net.

    Hugs, Kristi

Just a great - well written - lovely story.

I just wanted you to know that I have thoroughly enjoyed your stories.  Content is well done as is the framing of the story.  Some spell check would give the stories polish.  I can't wait to read the next one.

Lindsay

I loved this story as I do with most of your stories. Keep writing these wonderful stories.

I absolutely love the way your two lovers grow into their new roles..... and I really appreciate the detail in the hair and beauty department... sounds very true to life.   I love the choice of Beth's hair colour(s).  Maybe I'll try platinum blonde myself one day but for now red with highlights is perfect! Andy is a lucky guy but then,  in many ways,  by letting go a little,  his wife gets a bonus!
I'd have left the story with them boy/girl sometimes and girl/girl when the mood takes them.... just pure dreamworld ... but I appreciate why your story goes further.   I too wondered about the strap-on.   I love going down on my wife when she has a dildo in but with its business end 'available'.  Maybe you'll write a further chapter.

Hey, a genuine love story that happens to be tg, too. Or the other way around perhaps. Whichever, you wove your twin themes beautifully around each other.

Although I'm familiar with your other stories, I worried the longest time while reading that either Jackie's dildo or Napoleon's imperiousness were going to destroy the mood in some fashion.

We'll apparently never know how that dildo might get used, but if it does come in handy, I'm sure it will be a decision made by the two principals here. Thank you so much!

Great story, thoroughly enjoyed it. Well written without the need to stretch the imagination to make the story work.

Congratualtions.

luv

Paula