wow what wicked women. Not only do they take his busness from him for not hiring her. They make her a woman and keep her there for ever.

a brilliant story that i feel neeeds a follow up it would be nice to learn more about this great story more please

Excellent! but it really demands a follow-up.

Da Italian Anti-Discrimination League of Hoboken takes exception to da stereotypical portrayal of honest, hard-workin Italian-Americans as thugs an' criminals.  If ya don't stop wit' da unfair an' inaccurate portrayals my cousin Rocco might just pay youse a visit, if ya know what I mean.  Badda-bing, badda-0boom.

I really love your stories, all of them. Please don't stop writing.

I agree with all of Brandi's comments, so it's hard to say much more.  Suffice it to say that this is a fine addition to the long line of Jennifer White forced-fem stories.  As the little twist at the end shows, besides being one of the most prolific writers (for which we are all very grateful), Jen is also one of the more creative and talented writers.

Keep up the good work,
SS  

I love your story u posted about the owner of the club beign  turned into a woman. i would love to see it with images to show how he was transformed. just a thought would love to get a email back from you

I really loved this story.  I have to say this is one of your best stories in awhile.  I really enjoyed that no magic was used which I always find takes you out of the story.  I thought the Allison storyline though unbelievable was very good.  I think though I would have loved to hear more about her after the club was taken over.  It be nice to hear about her going home and living like that for a month where the club is only mentioned in the background.  Anyways I really enjoyed it,  keep up the good work.