I rellay wish there were more articles like this on the web.

Five years of marriage, but no children yet? In case of a sequel, it could be another twist: that Sherry and Mark have tried, but could not form a family. If now Andrea gets pregnant in just one month of trying and gets stuck as a woman forever, will Sherry get jealous of her former husband getting a baby? For once in a while, it is an opportunity to not let the bad gals win, as it happens in most of Jennifer's stories.

Jennifer,
The story was very satisfying ... as far as it goes.
Now I wait with tingling anticipation for the details of Andrea's month of servitude to Jon.  This will undoubtedly describe fully the circumstances of Andrea's pregnancy, labor, and birthing.  A nice touch might be Joyce's whimsical decision to change Sherry into Sam and then to make *him* the illicit vehicle of Andrea's impregnation.
Thank you for the continued stimulation your stories provide.
Rachel

thought it was pretty good.  Including all of the disadvantages of being a woman(periods-pregnancy). perhaps more detail on the disads would be good (as well as more reluctance at the experience of it and the transformation of his mind of from the initial repulsion to acceptance (or maybe he never accepts).  

When did the wife stop loving him?  
Is the witch a wanna be lover to the wife, such awful advise!  
Why would s/he even want to come back? S/he was just raped and will continue to be at the whim of the wife? Is this her example of what it means to be a woman? I hope not...

If s/he's lucky... a pregnancy, then a car will run over the rapist, a house will fall on the witch, and the wife will find the yellow brick road is fools gold with monkey turds liberally spread for her future.... alone.

Yes, tis only a story... but there are a few flaws.

Jennifer,

You have a great talent.  You could write, if you put your mind to it, the best transistion story ever written, or at least a candidate for that position.  This story, however, is an example of your failure to do that.

What Mark/Andria does in the month after the transition is more important than the transition that Mark had to become Andria.  It should have been the central theme of the story instead of the transistion.  Without that part of the story all you have is just a transistion story that is mediocre, at best.  With it you could have a great story that is memorable.  It is quality that is important, not quanity.

Please finish this story, and if nessary, rewrite what you written so far.  Have him go back to Sherry or have her stay with Jon.

hugs

Shelly aka shalimar

i love your stories i have posted on a couple i think and if i haven't i'll say it here i love them.  Can't wait to see what happens with the rest of this i take it there will be another part to the story.

Thanks again,
Tiffany