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Turned Out
by Kimberly Kennedy

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Comment by Johnny on 01/28/12
Again, a really arousing short story!  If only you could/would expound on the original story.....Oh, la la!!

Comment by Diane Sutton on 02/26/02
A nice story but very short. Still it gave enough of a plot to it that you understood what was taking place.

I would have liked much more if the author had taken it to a greater length so that more details and a longer story would have emerged.

I hope that in the future this will be the case as I feel the talent is there for longer pieces. However, if your fare is for short and to the point stories then this is a good story for you and you will find within it much to your liking.

Diane



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