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Turning Japanese
by Zoez

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Comment by suba suba on 11/07/19
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Comment by i love pron on 10/26/19
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Comment by suba me on 12/20/18
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Comment by matzcrorkz on 08/03/14
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Comment by online business on 09/12/13
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Comment by Silvia. on 05/18/13
Good tale, I liked!!!
Kisses.

Comment by lee lee on 01/05/08
OH dear I started to read it and then I felt myself well up with tears as that poor boy was going to be slowly feminized ( they were tears of joy and jealousy) I guess when a guy starts to cry at a story like this he is not really a guy after all.....just like Zoe! What a sweet (nonsexual) wonderfully gentle story. I loved it even though we all knew the outcome. Thank you!

Comment by cannibble on 07/16/07
it made me get wet eyes... silly huh...

Comment by julie j on 01/21/07
a brilliant story well worthg the read it appears to have been a complete set up from the begining well done great story more please

Comment by Pat on 03/11/06
Excellent story - enjoyable and well written.  Love the characters and that they cared for each other.  It would be great if we could find out how their relationship develops.

Best regards,

Comment by JCraft on 10/27/05
I wonderful story.  My only wish is that you could have lived up to your story title a little more and had young Sidney not only turning feminine, but "Turning Japanese" as well.  That said, it is still a very good story.
~JCraft

Comment by Early June on 10/23/05
I wouldn't think of trying to tell you how to make it better.  This story is so good the way it is, it needs no improvements.  I enjoyed the story because it was a win, win, story.  No one got hurt and everyone enjoyed the outcome.   I hope to see more stories from your.  Thank you for posting this one.

Comment by Joni W on 10/21/05
A very lovely story. I loved how you slowly transformed him and it was all his/her decision to go all of the way. I would love to see more of this story, and see the two getting married as two women.

Just a thought. You have a lot to work with actually.

Good Job

Comment by jenna on 10/17/05
I wonder what note was in the other letter. Also it would be nice to know how, I mean was it the ceral? wishful thinking, both. Or has Zoe's girs friend been slipping in dome hormones sometimes? Anyway nice story. Will there be more?

I hope so

Comment by Mysti on 10/15/05
     There were a number of good points to the story. I prefer femming stories where there's no coercion, violence, or blackmail. The descriptions were excellent, although I don't think that we got into Sid's mind enough to show his motivation. Also, the outcome didn't exactly match the title. I was expecting/hoping that Sid/Zoe would actually become Japanese- I have a fondness for cross-racial TG stories, and there are so few posted here.  OK- so that would be fantasy, but-given the whole setup (guy lives well while not working, and gets femmed by eating cereal), I don't think one more fantastic element would detract from the story. If you decide to try your hand at another story with an Asiatic setting, you might consider it.



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