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A Turning Point
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Comment by Janet on 03/13/10
Very interesting start, a welcome change from most. Keep it coming and keep it within the realm of the possible and it's likely to be one of the better stories available. Comment by dawn on 03/13/08 Can't wait for the next instalment! Maybe some sort of a hypnotic drug that will allow further change?Keep up the good work Comment by Cassandra on 03/13/07 I loved the start of what should be a very exciting story. I hope there will be more. Comment by julie j on 08/13/04 an interesting start its amazing what happens in the back water towns lookforeward to some more revelations in part two so far it has a good twist with it Comment by Jane Hudson on 12/31/03 Great story Comment by Monica on 01/12/02 Don't leave us hanging- let's have the rest of the story! Comment by Sharonn on 03/14/01 Fun. It is a great start and I am looking forward to more. Don't keep us waiting too long. Thanks. Comment by Jeffrey on 03/13/01 I enjoyed your story very much and hope to see more of what happens to Comment by Nellie D on 03/13/01 A different way for the transformation to happen. A form of a con run by the local people, sign here, Gosh what happened. Easy to read with fairly good detail. Comment by Amanda Walker on 03/13/01 Lovely keep it coming. Comment by Nikki on 03/13/01 The story line is fresh and I can't wait to see another chapter. |
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