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TV Detective
by Paula Mortenson

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Comment by Silvia. on 04/01/10
Hi Paula.
This is a bad and sad story.
I hate everything that is forced, and I hate blackmail too!
I didn't like the story!
Silvia.

Comment by DEE on 09/22/07
REALLY NEAT STORY; THOROUGHLY ENJOYABLE

Comment by Andrea Foster on 12/12/04
This is well-written, and very entertaining. I always love a spot of blackmail... It's so much more realistic and satisfying than mind-control or physical B&D style "forced" cross-dressing. I liked the way that Christine had gradually taken over Jerry's life (perhaps a "prequel" might be in order?).

I don't know if the author intends to take this story further, but it does read a bit like a "Part One". Needless to say, I'd love to see more.

Comment by leah on 08/26/04
If this TV detective sees more episodes, I surely hope that Paula surprisingly finds that she is engaged in a contest that is as even as the current presidential contest --- and just as passionate (maybe not as nasty, after all both of these people are the "good guys.")

Comment by TiffFox on 08/24/04
I like it, great explanation, hints of interesting things to come

I do hope for a neutral or happy ending, but can't wait to see if this continues, whichever way it goes



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