More posts of this quality. Not the usual c***, palese

The story is good and flows well, but the whole effort is spoilt by stupid spelling mistakes. grammatical errors and the use of incorrect words.  
Unfortunately, like the majority of writers you fail to read your work through and feel an urge to dispose of it quickly, too quickly in your case.  
There are some stories which should be disposed of into Trash, but this is not one of those.   Better luck next time.

Your writing skills are very good and the subjects well described, however it is just ruined when it becomes  bi-sexual.  I can only
assume that sexually this is your  orientation and/or one of your own fantasies.

I know I don't have to read it, but one does not know where the story is going without perusing it.  To each his own.

This idea is wonderful, and as all of your great stories, I particularly love the vinyl(plastic) and curler scenes. They're super! Especially little sissy Suburban Housewife!!!

Darlene, I just love your stories, please, please post more!

luv,
Sissy Marcia

I first read this on the Gaycafe/library storysite where it is archived as author unknown.Now that I have found out who wrote it.
Is is a wonderful piece,very detailed and compelling.There is no need to tell how much it dovetales w/ my own fantasies. keep up the good work