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Twelve Hours
by Sally Smith

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Comment by juliej on 08/07/05
i stand by previous comments

Comment by julie j on 11/05/04
it could be a good story but with part 2 not submitted it is difficult to follow why was part 2 not in its a shame & ruined what was turning out to be good

Comment by Pervette on 02/17/04
It looked as if it was going to be a good story. Indeed, maybe it
is. But the punctuation & sentence structure are so bad that it is
actually hard to follow the story.
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These are not thus things for English teachers to fuss about. Read
Stephen King's book on writing & see what a best-selling author
thinks about these matters.
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Well, maybe you simply can't. Some people actually find these
difficulties insurmountable. If so, ask, either here or on
Fictionmania; there are people who will edit your stories for you.
And after all, you do think it's a good story, don't you? Worth
taking trouble over, isn't it?
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Pervette



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