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Twin Girls?
by Laurie Ann B

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Comment by  Miss Fitt on 05/16/18
     SORDID !

Comment by tewi on 08/13/13
This certainly represents a TON OF WORK and time and effort .. thank you for writing this four part series ..

Comment by Silvia. on 07/09/09
Sorry, but it isn't a good story.
Silvia.

Comment by Beckyrnm on 12/19/06
I enjoyed your story.  It would be cool if you did continue it.  I would like to know what happens next.

Comment by juliej on 09/03/06
a set up from the begining but a great story wellworth the read more please,the writing is very good and it seem danas mother with a few whit lies has got what she wants it will be intersting how his father acts over the next few years &monthe as well as at school

Comment by suna on 08/17/06
mom is a decietful,twisted and malevolent.

I hope that the father figures out what's hapening soon.


Comment by Karen on 12/16/05
A great story.  Please continue.  Perhaps the next time the twins go to the mall they should get their ears pierced so Dana will always have a little feminine mark.

Comment by Sophie on 12/14/05
Just the kind of story I love! Please carry on!!

Comment by Sissy Susan on 12/13/05
A delightful beginning and I hope it continues.Despite his early protests,Dana soon notices the difference between his boy clothes and his girly things and is pleasantly surprised.With encouragement from the whole family,I'm sure he will soon realise that the joys of Sissyhood far outweigh those of boyhood.By the time he reaches puberty,all the boys will come knocking on his door and he'll adore their attention.More please!

Comment by rascal on 12/09/05
This is a great story. The boy should continue to be feminized. Since the mother seems to wear the pants in this family, the mother should get some help from friends and now start turning the husband into the little sissy that he seems to be.

Comment by Brenda on 12/09/05
hmm, I'm wondering what's up with Dad.  He caved pretty quickly.

Any more?  I hope.

Thanks
Brenda

Comment by Jill Micayla on 12/06/05
I like the start, seems as though mom wears the pants. I think that in intermix of friends would work well. Make Billy a little obnoxious and then have his mom put him in a dress. I do not think a six year old should be obstinate nor passive resistant. Most six year olds do not question parental authority.
More installments would be nice.

Comment by Judi on 12/05/05
What a sweet story. Thank you for writing it Laurie. I hope there will be more chapters. The child will be so much happier as a girl like his sister.

Judi

Comment by stephanie on 12/05/05
I would wish he (she) were a bit older say 13-14. A wonderful start.

Comment by Jezzi Stewart on 12/05/05
Well, you've really made him too young to fight this physically or by running away, and you've made it clear he can't expect any help from dad; I'd like to see him practice passive resistance - go along and do what he's told but only what he's told, and never smile except when ordered to do so, then see what his mom does.  OR, raise more hell as a girl, deliberately this time.

Comment by Kristi Fitzpatrick on 12/04/05
Laurie:

  Great start keep it going. I like the playfullness and hope it turns out happily in the end.

   Kristi



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